A post by Nazar Mubeen
It was a rainy day when
I first saw her. I was standing at a bus stop to save myself from getting
drenched. There was a lot of mud on the roads, people were running here and
there, seeking sheds to escape from the rain, children were enjoying in that rain,
making paper boats, some shopkeepers on footpath were trying to save their
items from getting ruined in the rain.
Suddenly, my eyes fell
upon a pretty girl but I was unaware of her name, status, and even age. She was
sitting in a car with some other guy and wanted to come outside to feel the
rain but the man with her was instructing her not to do it and sit calmly. Was he trying to engulf the freedom of that girl
or really cared about her? I don’t know.
She was staring at the
other people on the road and I guess she was feeling jealous of them. She didn't listen to the shouts of the man and came out of the car at last.
I was standing there
looking for her reactions when suddenly a bus came. People started pushing each
other to get inside, I didn’t move neither wanted to go, I don’t know why but I
only wished to see the girl. The girl jumped like she was a free bird, she was
feeling the rain with open hands like she wants to get lost in it. She was lost
in her dreamy world.
The rain started slowing
down gradually. The man inside was watching helplessly for a long time now and
finally he came out. In that moment, I realized that the two personalities
living together had a totally different vision about life; one wanted to just
stare from outside and other wanted to take it inside her and feel the joy.
Man – What do you think
you were doing?
Girl – I was just
trying to feel the rain.
Man – Is this the way
to feel the rain?
Girl – Not actually but
I didn’t want to miss this rain.
Man – For this stupid rain,
you are spoiling my status and my expectations from you. Moreover, you
disobeyed me.
Girl – Is my freedom
and desire less important than your terms?
Man- Come and sit
inside. We have to go now.
Girl- No, tell me
first. Give me the answer.
Man – I don’t want to
talk on this.
Man took her with him
inside the car forcefully without giving her answer. She was sobbing and
feeling bad.
Who is right or wrong I
can’t say, but for a girl freedom, desire, happiness is as important as
anything else and for a man, pride and status seems more important than
anything else. Women wants to see love, care, pride, affection, dreams in her
life, wants to feel like a free bird, wants to see the respect from others but
does men really treat them like it? I was lost in the thoughts and then rain
stopped and I went for my work taking many questions in mind and still
searching for their answers.
You can read the story
of one such girl in the novel titled, Cheer Up – The Worst is yet to come.
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